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Resume Review #004 — The Data Analyst Who Listed Tools, Not Proof

A fictional data analyst resume gets marked up for tool-heavy claims, vague analytics bullets, noisy skills, GPA clutter, and the rewrite that turns dashboard work into measurable business impact.

Fictional composite resume. No real candidate, employer, or applicant data.
This week: a data analyst resume that sounds busy but never proves business impact. The resume says "dashboards," "customer data," and "A/B testing." A recruiter reads: What changed? How many people used it? Did a decision improve?
Swipe through the markup:
  1. The biggest problem: tools are listed as proof, but tools are not outcomes.
  2. The experience section hides scope, decisions, and measurable results.
  3. The skills and education section reads like a keyword buffet.
  4. The rewrite turns vague duties into bullets with action, scope, and a quantified result.
Use this check on your own resume: if a bullet could be copied onto someone else's resume without changing a word, it is probably too generic.

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